First few pages of Levitation For Beginners

Whenever I think of what happened all those decades ago, what comes to mind is something I know for a fact had nothing to do with it. What I picture is the injured,
abraded face of my teacher’s son. A bloodied and bruised twelve- or thirteen- year- old, unfit that day to attend his own school, and installed instead in a chair beside his
father’s desk to stare glumly back at awestruck nine- and ten- year- olds. And even though I know better, even though I know there was no connection with what was
to happen a year or so later, to me it’s as if his accident was the start of it.

As to the circumstances, I don’t recall exactly what we were told, but we did know he had been hit by a car. Or run over as we would have said amongst ourselves,
and certainly a nine- year- old looking at that mess of scabs could persuade herself of tyre tracks. My adult eye, looking back, sees that the damage – shocking though
undoubtedly it was – was superficial. He had glanced off that car and there were no other apparent injuries.

No bandages or splints, and he sat on that chair with no obvious physical discomfort, the chief insult to his tender twelve- or thirteen- year- old pride.

And it’s possible that almost half a century later he bears few if any scars from the incident and – who knows? – might not even remember it, or not as often as,
inexplicably, I do. It’s possible too that he might already have had, or have gone on to have, a lot of scrapes. But me, at nine years old: I had never come across a wounding
so spectacular, and I was astounded that anyone could be so damaged and still standing, or sitting. It looked to me to have been a terrifyingly close- run thing.
If I close my eyes it is as if it were yesterday, but now, thinking about it, I wonder if it wasn’t the spectacle of that poor face – the cuts and scrapes – that made the
impression, but the fury in the eyes of a boy who, I imagine, miscalculated in a moment of high spirits and was brought down to earth with a bump. Then brought
so low as to be stuck in that chair at the side of his dad’s desk, staring down a class of nine- year- olds and daring us to pity him.

The seventies: butterscotch Angel Delight and Raleigh chopper bikes, and Clunk Click, and Crackerjack and Jackanory, ‘Layla’ and the Bee Gees, flares and ponchos, and the long hot summer of ’76. But then again: Vietnam, Pinochet, Watergate, Bloody Sunday, the IRA and ETA and the Baader–Meinhof and Black September and the Red Brigade and the Angry Brigade. And little girl after little girl lifted in broad daylight from lanes and pavements and bundled into a van; bike dropped, wheels still spinning, for friends to find. A thirteen- year- old boy delivering a newspaper to a farmhouse shot in the head at close range.

In 1972, we had almost all the seventies still to come. We were a year shy of the Wombles and Man About the House, to say nothing of MAS*H and For Mash Get
Smash, with several more years before Starsky & Hutch and Charlie’s Angels and The Good Life. In June of that year, we had yet to marvel at the Olympian feats of Olga
Korbut and Mark Spitz. And still training as if their lives depended on it were those athletes who would be massacred in Munich that September.

Forget, too, any long hot summer, because the summer of 1972 in England was one of the worst on record, with the Wimbledon men’s final rained off for the first time in ninety- five years. And this summer that was no summer followed two national states of emergency and the three- day weeks during a winter in which we often spent our evenings in our coats by candlelight.

And – remember – there were no fire alarms in our homes in 1972. And a lot of unguarded hearths for us to gather around in our flammable nightwear. Upstairs on
our mothers’ bedside tables were bottles of barbiturates with no child safety caps; and beneath the beds, plastic bags for pulling playfully over our heads. Outside, in the
garden shed, boxes of fireworks that on Bonfire Night would blow up in our faces. And all this was for those of us lucky enough to have a home because – as we all now know – God help you if you were taken into care.

Our neighbours’ gardens glittered darkly with laburnum seeds, and in the alley behind the fence were abandoned fridges perfect for our games of hide- and- seek. At the
end of the street idled the ice cream van from behind which, brandishing our Mivvis, we could bolt into the path of a driver – un- clunked, un- clicked – who’d had one more for the road. I’m only half joking when I say I’m surprised that any of us lived to tell the tale.


Extra material for The Queen Of Subtleties

It’s a story with everything, isn’t it: you name it, but any list would have to include love and passion, heartbreak, scandal, rivalry, politics and the pursuit of power, revolution (kind of ie the reformation), paranoia, betrayal and murder. And – particularly good, in my view – it’s all true, too! A big plus for a novelist is that the story is populated by larger-than-life characters: not just Anne and Henry, who were, to say the least, huge characters, but also the amazingly unbending, dogged Catherine of Aragon (often much underestimated); the spine-chillingly awful Duke of Norfolk, snide, callous and calculating; Anne’s louche, saturnine brother George etc etc. The shape of the story, too, fascinated me: that so-slow rise (Henry and Anne were ‘together’ for seven years before their marriage), beset at every stage by problems, and then, after all that. the breathtaking swiftness of Anne’s downfall (which even she never saw coming).

Actually, though, my being drawn to the story was also about all the things that it wasn’t: it’s usually understood as the story of a middle-aged king leaving an empty marriage for a beguiling young beauty. It’s much more interesting than that, and I was keen to put the record straight. Henry wasn’t middle-aged: he was 35 and in his prime (and what a prime!) when he fell for Anne. The marriage to Catherine (all nineteen years of it – much longer than most people realise) had been of Henry’s choice, very much so: indeed, it was rather an odd choice, at the time (in other words, political expediency had nothing to do with it). Henry and Catherine had been close as teenagers and young adults, they were each other’s confidantes during difficult years (Catherine, at sixteen, was stranded in England, living pretty much in penury for many years after her widowing; and Henry had a very hard time of it with his father). They remained very good friends throughout their marriage. In the early years, they doted on each other, revelled in each other’s company, staying up until all hours to debate the various hot topics of the day. Catherine wasn’t dull – she’d had an unsurpassed education (as had her mother, the formidable Isabella of Castille), and was extremely clever. Nor was she a frumpy killjoy – she spent small fortunes on clothes, for example. She was clearly adored by people, inspiring lifelong loyalty from her friends and staff (despite the great danger for them) and most of the population of England in general. True, though: by the time of Henry’s falling for Anne, Catherine had quietened down, become rather sedentary and very religious. She was forty, and had had numerous pregnancies but only one surviving child, the princess Mary.

Anne wasn’t young, not by the standards of the day – she was 26 when Henry fell for her. She wasn’t beautiful, or at least not by the standards of the day (Tudor tastes were for buxom blue-eyed blondes; Anne was skinny, sallow, dark-eyed). It’s more likely that she had what we would call sex-appeal. She was no bimbo, though, but well-educated, well-read, politically astute and quick-witted. Very different from her sister, she had had no prior liaisons except for one serious love affair (to which Wolsey put a stop, for political reasons, and for which she seems never to have forgiven him). She resisted Henry’s approaches for some time. She’s usually portrayed in fiction as a harridan; but although she was mindboggling outspoken (something that drew me to her!), she could also be considerably charming (which is perhaps what drew Henry – and other men – to her). She’s often portrayed as calculating, cold, but it seems to me that on the contrary she was a passionate character (and she was passionate about her baby, by all accounts. One example is that she wanted to breastfeed Elizabeth herself, which simply wasn’t done). I think of her as a modern woman: ambitious and energetic, juggling her personal and public lives.


Extra material for The Sixth Wife

The Sixth Wife focusses on the last days (well, year and a half) of Katherine Parr, Henry’s sixth wife, the one who survived him (…by a year and a half). Her story fascinates me, because she was such a clever, sensible woman, so good a judge of character, outstandingly diplomatic, not only surviving difficult (indeed, terrifying) times and circumstances but doing so brilliantly, rescuing and reconciling others along the way …but as soon as Henry died, she fell for a cad and it was her undoing. She married the gorgeous but notorious Thomas Seymour (executed largely for his alleged carryings-on with the teenaged princess Elizabeth, who, as his wife’s step-daughter, was, of course, in a sense, also his own step-daughter), got pregnant, which was a delight for her because it hadn’t happened in her three previous marriages and she was in her mid-thirties (she loved children, was adored by her many step-children), weathered the trouble with Elizabeth (kept it under wraps, kept her cool), but then died as soon as the baby girl was born. After her death, Thomas Seymour misbehaved with Elizabeth again, more publically, and his execution was seven months later. (The orphaned baby, Mary, disappears from all records before the age of two and is assumed to have died as an infant: an awful end to this awful tale.)

Unfortunately, it’s all too familiar when a sensible woman falls for an unsuitable man (in that sense, the story of Katherine’s last marriage is archetypal, just as Anne Boleyn’s story – man leaves middle-aged wife for younger woman and it all goes horribly wrong – can be said to be), but I wanted to look closer at this particular marriage. Katherine wasn’t ‘everywoman’ or just any woman, she was Dowager Queen of England when she made this particular, spectacular misjudgement in belated pursuit of her own happiness. The background to, and circumstances in which these events happened are unique and, to me, fascinating. Oddly, I’ve ended up fictionalising in a way that I didn’t in my novel of Anne. I’m telling Katherine’s tale via her best friend, Catherine, Duchess of Suffolk: another strong woman of the time. In all my reading, for both the Anne Boleyn novel and this one, Catherine crops up time and time again: she seems to have been everywhere, on the sidelines at all the important events during this period of history.


In some respects, I was drawn to Catherine: her passion for her two sons, her zeal for religious reform, her marrying one of her servants, her lack of compromise and outspokenness and no-nonsense demeanour. (There’s an anecdote that I particularly like: she called her lap-dog ‘Gardiner’, after the principal catholic bishop, so that she could make her friends laugh by calling him to heel.) In other respects, though, she puzzled me and even repelled me: her complaints about the costs of looking after Katherine’s orphaned daughter, and her refusal to testify for an old friend even though it wouldn’t have harmed her to do so and even when she knew he was facing execution. In the novel, the one fictional aspect is Catherine’s intensely sexual affair with her pregnant best friend’s new husband, whom she doesn’t even really like. This made it hard for me to like her (and, here, ‘her’ means the character in the book, the one I invented). I understood her, I think, in the end, but didn’t much like her. And that was gruelling: spending so much time (the year and a half that it took me to write the book) ‘in her head’. She tells herself a lot of lies.


Extra material for The Queen’s Sorrow

Mary Tudor was England’s first ruling queen: something that most of us forget, if we ever knew it. Her five-year reign, overshadowed by that of her half-sister Elizabeth, is notorious for the burning at the stake of almost three hundred ‘heretics’. For many of us who do know something of Mary, it’s only that she’s ‘Bloody Mary’. She remains so, for the English, even after almost five hundred years. There is no national monument to her, nor was there ever.

For those who know a little about her, it’s probably that – to say the least – she wasn’t glamorous. She was obsessively hard-working and intensely religious (Catholic, no less). In her younger years, she’d been blighted by her parents’ protracted, bitter and lamentably public divorce. Decades of disinheritance had followed, and what was effectively internal exile, during which time her practice of her religion – her chief comfort in life – was increasingly hampered. By middle-age, when she came to the throne, she was in poor physical and mental health, living only for the restoration of Catholicism in England. Then, during her years as queen, came the longing for a man who was clearly only doing his job in marrying her, the pitiable phantom pregnancies, and the signing of all those death warrants along with letters chiding law-enforcers for not pursuing the burnings more vigorously.

In the English popular imagination, Mary is, at best, embarrassing, and at worst, repugnant. Think Kathy Burke’s portrayal in the film ‘Elizabeth’.

But the truth is more complicated. (Isn’t it always.) Mary inspired devoted service and lifelong loyalty from those who worked for her. Regardless of differences of religious persuasion, almost everyone who knew her personally was impressed by her (one exception being her half-sister). She was generous and patient, interested in people and their children. When she came to the throne, she appointed an unmanageably large council – comprised just as much of those whose views were opposed to her own as those with whom she had an affinity – and insisted always upon consultation. In the early years of her reign, she was notably merciful, in the face of a good deal of disapproval from all quarters. She never had any interest in the trappings of power, seeking only to do what she saw as her job. And her job, as she saw it, was to do right.

All very admirable. How did it happen, then, that this woman – whose proclamation as queen caused jubilation among Londoners such as had never been seen before – was within five years reviled, and her country under martial law? What went so badly wrong?

Well, she was a woman. No one in England – including Mary herself – knew what to expect of a woman ruler. A little later, Elizabeth would face the same problem, but she had the time (and the confidence, the daring, and the wit) to develop her own complex strategy. Mary, coming to the throne in her late thirties, didn’t have time on her side, and was desperate to keep everyone happy. Should she – lifelong spinster – get married? Yes, to provide an heir and thereby the stability that England had so damagingly lacked for decades. But no, if it meant compromising England’s independence. And surely it did mean that, because at that time a wife was expected to obey her husband.

After much agonising and praying for guidance, Mary decided to marry, and decided to accept the offer of her nephew, Philip, the Spanish heir. Spain, of course, was Catholic, and it was the empire. Opposition in England was vociferous.

If Mary couldn’t perhaps have done right over the issue of marriage, there’s no such excuse for her other fundamental political misjudgement. She misread the people’s celebration of her coming to the throne – the triumph of the underdog, the succession of the rightful heir – for an endorsement of her counter-reformation (the restoration of Catholicism, the return of England to Rome). During the previous decade or two, Protestantism had become more deep-rooted in England than she could understand. The more she cracked down, the more opposition grew, but still she failed to grasp it. She ended up acting in isolation, against all counsel including that of her most conservative Catholic mainstays and even the Spaniards. The burnings only stopped with her own death.

If all that wasn’t bad enough, the weather wasn’t on her side – and that’s the understatement of five centuries. The weather during the mid-1550s was appalling, the summers drenched. Successive harvests failed, bringing England to the brink of famine. The populations of the cities were swollen by the destitute and despairing.

And into this chaos came the hapless Spaniards in Philip’s retinue, under strict orders from their prince to keep their heads down and behave as the perfect guests. Unfortunately, there were far more of them than London – xenophobic at the best of times – could accommodate, because someone had failed to pass on to Philip that the queen would be providing a full household for him, but declining (due to council’s opposition) to fund it. So, Philip was stuck with two expensive households, the English workers determined that the foreigners wouldn’t take their places at court and their livelihoods. The mood was ugly: the Spaniards lived in real, physical danger. Most of them should’ve been sent home but, for various on-going political and economic reasons, any return kept being postponed. So there they were, for more than a year: stuck in a hostile London, daily being fleeced, harrassed and set upon, living amid increasing unrest, enduring relentless rain and a consequent lack of fresh food.

I was fascinated to read about the experience of the Spaniards in London in 1554/5, and decided to write a novel set during Mary’s reign from the viewpoint of one of these homesick visitors…


Extra material for The Confessions Of Katherine Howard

Almost nothing is known about Katherine Howard (not even how old she was – she’s estimated to have been between seventeen and twenty at the time of her execution) and there are no verified likelinesses of her. Unfortunately for Katherine, what we do know of is her sexual history, which we know in great, lurid detail from the various witness statements.

The story is that she caught the eye of the king on her very first evening at court. (She’d come to be a lady-in-waiting for Henry’s new, German wife, Anne of Cleves, and she’d probably never been to court before.) She was said to be pretty rather than beautiful, and very small. In her late teens, she’d come from nowhere: she was a nobody. Well, no, actually: she was somebody in that she was a Howard – one of England’s major families at the time – but within that vast family she was at the bottom of the heap, one of the youngest of the many orphaned children of an unsuccessful, impoverished Howard. She’d been brought up in the household of her step-grandmother, alongside lots of other relatives, family friends and the usual hangers-on.

The king very quickly managed to sideline Anne of Cleves and marry Katherine. He adored her. After all the troubles with various wives, here he was, facing his old age with a pretty, amenable (her motto was ‘No will but his’) and apparently uncomplicated (by which I mean unambitious and uneducated) teenaged wife. Henry wasn’t quite yet the incapacited ogre of his latter five years but he was heading that way, and Katherine gave him a new lease of life. He was delighted with her; he showered her with riches (particularly clothes) and she – poor little rich girl – lapped it up.

Fifteen months into the marriage, on All Saints’ Day, the king was at a special service of his own devising at which he was giving thanks to God for his wonderful wife when Archbishop Cranmer sidled up and pressed a letter into his hand. In the letter – which Cranmer had written because he couldn’t face telling the king in person – was the news that a man had arrived at court to make allegations about Katherine’s conduct in the years before she’d become queen. The man’s sister had worked in the household where Katherine had grown up. The allegations concerned sexual experimentation in the girls’ dormitory, Katherine’s relationship at the age of fourteen or fifteen with her music teacher and then with a lad called Francis Dereham who worked in the household and to whom, it seemed, she’d practically been married (to whom she’d been ‘pre-contracted’, to use the Tudor term ie to whom she’d pledged herself, which made it acceptable to have sex. Married all but in name, in other words). This was the same Francis Dereham who was now working as the queen’s secretary.

Initially, Henry didn’t give this much credence, but asked Cranmer to investigate. In the meantime, he contrived to avoid Katherine (in fact, he never saw her again). Cranmer and cronies duly investigated, whilst managing to keep it under wraps. Within just a week of questioning people (Katherine and Francis Dereham included), in which everyone rushed to dob everyone else in, (they were just kids, after all, and they were terrified), Cranmer et al had verified the story about the relationship with Francis Dereham but also, somehow, uncovered something much more serious. In the course of all the interrogations, towards the end of that week, someone let slip that the history with Francis Dereham was nothing: the queen was currently having an affair with Thomas Culpeper, a young man employed in the king’s close, personal service (a young man who slept in the king’s bedchamber, no less… and the queen’s, too, quipped the French ambassador when he heard).

All three – Katherine, Francis Dereham, and Thomas Culpeper – were convicted of treason and executed. Henry was devastated, and from this point onwards he aged considerably, becoming the foul-tempered invalid of legend.

I always said I wouldn’t write about Katherine Howard because she isn’t interesting (bless ‘er): she was just a gal who screwed around. But, then, I tend to be drawn to whatever I’ve always claimed I won’t do (!). After writing about Mary Tudor, which was grim, I went back to Katherine Howard’s story for a bit of a break – and was instantly, utterly captivated (seriously overstaying my welcome, I suspect, in a coffee shop whilst I read the story through to its horrible conclusion).

What captivated me?.. First, the swiftness of her downfall (as with so many of these Tudor stories). It’s a highly dramatic story, a lot happens in a very short space of time and it seems to come out of nowhere (it was all done and dusted within a week – she went from fairytale princess to whore within a week)

Secondly, the character of Katherine. Which is ironic, because she’s always portrayed as having no character: that’s usually seen as her defining characteristic, as it were; she’s often described by historians as having been ‘a silly little girl’ (and that’s a quote). Her major biographer suggests that because no one pleaded for her at the end, she was probably a ‘shallow’ girl (whereas I suspect it was because there was no one – not of any influence – to plead for her; she was a nobody, she’d come from nowhere). What was strikingly clear to me, though, from reading the various accounts, that she was a much more complex character. These readings of her as ‘unsophisticated’ are themselves unsophisticated. The historians have her as ‘sweet-natured’, presumably on the evidence of her many friends of around her own age and the light-hearted atmosphere in her household (lots of partying), but I think ‘popular’ is more like it, and I do think the two are different. And Katherine was clearly sexually curious and sexually confident, relishing the intrigue of romance and sex and damn good at it. She wasn’t taken advantage of by boys, as the conventional accounts tend to have it. If anyone was ‘using’ anyone else, she was ‘using’ these young men. By all accounts (including her own), she was the one who initiated these relationships and who ended them when she wanted to move on (as she always did). Yet despite this perhaps rather cavalier behaviour, people stuck around for her. She kept people in thrall to her.

My impression, upon reading about her, was an overwhelming, unequivocal, ‘I know you!’. I was at school with a girl so like this Katherine whom I was seeing as I read between the lines. Dangerous. Damaged, if you looked closely enough. I watched that girl from very close quarters all through our formative years; I watched her reign supreme in that small world despite being-secretly-vulnerable-inside-blah-blah (ie cliché but – as cliches so often are – true), just as Katherine Howard did and was. I suspected I could get that character down on paper very well.

And whilst we’re on the subject of revision: Francis Dereham, character of. He’s always portrayed as a seducer and an opportunist. Rather sinister. It’s always speculated that he was offered employment in the queen’s household in an attempt to keep him quiet about the past. But nowhere in my reading did I find any evidence of this. Katherine notoriously surrounded herself with her own people, people from her own small world, from her previous life: it was how she operated, although ultimately it became her downfall. I think Francis Dereham was very loyal to her – despite having been dumped by her when she found she could move on to better things (Thomas Culpepper was older – late twenties – and of much higher social status, and he was also much sought-after by the ladies…), and despite his still (by several reliable accounts) holding a torch for her. He gave her all his money to safeguard when he went off on business to Ireland, with instructions to keep it for herself should he fail to return. He trusted her. They were old friends as well as ex-lovers. ‘My’ Francis Dereham is quite a sweet guy. Unlike Thomas Culpeper, who was all swagger.

My novel is told from the point of view of one of Katherine’s close friends, one of the girls who grew up alongside her and came to court to work for her when she became queen: Katherine Tylney. The chief interrogator on the Katherine Howard case remarked of a certain Katherine Tylney that she’d been very useful to him. ‘Cat’, as she’s known in my novel, has a bit more about her than Katherine Howard does, and her relationship with Katherine Howard, although close, is ambivalent. She’s in Katherine Howard’s shadow – because everyone who was close to Katherine always was – but she’s a stronger, sharper yet also warmer character.

Her recollections start with that seemingly-blissful evening on 1st November, when all seems right with the world, when England seems to have gone back twenty years to before all the troubles of the Reformation, and when these young people seem to have-it-made… but Francis then disappears for a day or two. Cat is in a relationship – is in love – with Francis Dereham. From him, she learns that he was taken in for questioning, and that the questioning was about Katherine’s adolescent days.

Although the exposure of Katherine’s past would do her reputation a great deal of damage, and probably enrage the king and alienate him from her (it looked likely that she’d be sent to a nunnery), it wasn’t life-threatening for anyone concerned. When she herself was questioned, she was adamant that she was never pre-contracted to Francis Dereham, and therefore was no bigamist in later marrying the king. And as for lovers before she ever met the king: well, he might not like the idea of it, but there was no law against it (nor was it particularly unusual – the Tudors were an earthy lot). Likewise for Francis: his life might be made unpleasant – if not impossible – at court, by the king, but it wasn’t in danger.

However, within a matter of days, it became clear that Archbishop Cranmer was set on making something much more of all this. His reasons were political: the Howards were conservative and catholic, and Cranmer – with his fledgling Reformation stalled after the death of Anne Boleyn – wanted to see them discredited, disgraced, gone from the position of influence and power that they had attained due to one of their girls being queen. He began to make much in his interrogations of the fact that Francis Dereham was in the queen’s service: the implication was that the relationship was on-going.

‘My’ Cat Tilney knows that this is untrue, and that if Cranmer was told the truth – that the queen was in fact having an affair with Thomas Culpeper – then Francis’s past misdemeanours would pale into insignificance and he would walk free. The problem is, her old friend Katherine most definitely wouldn’t…


Extra material for The May Bride

Chances are, if you’re a Tudor afficionado, you’ve come across the Seymour family scandal of the 1520s. But you’re probably thinking: Remind me again? It’s not your fault: there’s almost nothing, officially, to know. As far as I’m aware, the historical record gives us only this: Edward Seymour – eldest brother of Henry V111’s third wife, Jane, and, ultimately, Lord Protector of England during the reign of Henry and Jane’s young son – repudiated his first wife, Katherine Fillol/Filiol, sometime in the early years of their marriage, sending her to a nunnery and disinheriting their two infant sons. His reason? Well, for that, we have only the rumour that he believed she’d had an affair with his father.

Perhaps you think that kind of carry-on was normal for the Tudors: repudiated wives, nunneries. But far from it – although, interestingly, another man, at exactly this time, was trying very hard to set aside his own wife. ‘Man’, ‘wife’? King, queen, no less: Henry V111 and Catherine of Aragon. Try as the king might, though, it took him seven years and the wrenching of England from Rome, and even then you couldn’t really have called it a success.

No, what happened at Wolfhall was drastic even then, and particularly so for a family such as Edward’s. The Seymours of the 1520s were not who they’d become in the following two decades thanksin different waysto Edward and his maverick younger brother, Thomas. The Seymours of Katherine Filliol’s time were by all accounts well-respected country people; the father was Justice of the Peace for Wiltshire. They weren’t at court, didn’t keep company with the characters we read about, the characters who still, from five hundred years back, grab our attention.

And Edward himself: I simply couldn’t square this awful story with what I knew of him. He was ambitious in what I think of as the right way, by which I mean he was hardworking, diplomatic, capable and cautious. You can debate the success or otherwise of his years as de facto ruler of England, but there’s no denying that the far-reaching changes of Edward V1’s reign – crucial in shaping English culture as we recognise it today – happened under his protectorate. He was nothing if not forward-thinking.

A man, surely, I felt, who’d have gone to any lengths to avoid personal scandal. But, then, in a sense that’s exactly what he did, because how better to deal with a supposedly errant wife than to shut her up in a nunnery.

So, what’s the truth of it? What’s a matter of historical record? Katherine was co-heiress (with her sister) of Sir William Filliol/Fillol, of Woodlands at Horton, in Dorset, which was within fifty miles of the Seymour’s Wiltshire home of Wolfhall. Edward and Katherine married in the early 1520s, when they themselves were in their early twenties, and went on to have two sons (John and Edward). In 1527, Katherine’s father re-wrote his will shortly before his death to stipulate that neither Katherine nor Edward nor their children receive ‘parts or parcell’ of his estate, and that Katherine receive an annual pension of £40 on condition that she live in ‘some honest house of Relegion of wymen’. By an Act of Parliament in 1530, Edward had the terms of that will set aside. He was re-married by 1536, which can only mean that Katherine had either died or become a nun. In 1540, he received a grant through Parliament permitting him to alter his succession to the children of his second wife.

The rumour of adultery comes from a marginal note in Vincent’s Baronage, added well after the deaths of everyone concerned, which translates from the Latin to claim that Katherine was ‘repudiated’ because, after the marriage, she had ‘known the father’.

And there we have it; that’s all what we have.

Just think of what we don’t know. Did Katherine and Edward marry for love? As newlyweds, where did they live? – at Wolfhall? And then what really did happen? was it really as the Latin scribble has it? And if so, how did it happen? (Perhaps we shouldn’t assume that if there was a liaison, it was was consensual on Katherine’s part.) And – sorry to be indelicate – how much of it happened? – how long was it going on? When? And then how did it ever come to light? What did Katherine admit to, what did she deny or attempt to explain away? Who did or didn’t believe her? How did Edward’s father answer the accusation? What sanctions – if any – did he face, and how did he live it down, both inside and outside the family? How did Edward, himself, live it down? – because he certainly did, going from strength to strength. Where did Katherine go, and what were the terms of her confinement? Did she ever see her sons, and what did they grow up knowing? What was her ultimate fate?

And those two little boys? In my experience, that’s what people most often want to know, and history books do give us an answer of sorts. Both sons are said to have been with Edward in the Tower when he was indicted for treason (on largely trumped up charges) in the late 1540s, John dying there (of illness) a few months after his father’s execution. Edward Junior became High Sheriff of Devon: in other words, he seems to have gone on to have a respectable career, and, indeed, family life, because after the death of the 7th Duke of Somerset in the eighteenth century, the line of descendancy reverted so that it is from him, Katherine’s second son, that the current Duke is descended.
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As for all those unanswered questions, here’s what I think… My guess is that Katherine and Edward did marry for love, or at least something like it, because they married at an age that was – for their class – relatively young; neither would’ve been under pressure to marry at that time. Edward could’ve – and, in the light of what happened, should’ve – waited until he’d begun to make a career for himself at court; he could’ve then married one of the in-crowd. His second wife – the scarily ambitious Anne Stanhope – was an ideal match for him.

I suspect the young newlyweds did live at Wolfhall, and I wonder if the few months that Edward spent away in France (having joined the Duke of Suffolk’s brief, unsuccessful campaign of 1527), had something to do with what went wrong. I’ve read that Edward discovered poems written for his wife by his father, but as far as I know, that’s unsubstantiated. What is true, though, is that Seymour senior was friends, when younger, with the poet John Skelton. A few words, here, about Edward’s father, John: he’d ‘married up’, and was younger than his wife; I calculate that he’d have been in his mid-forties at the time of the scandal. Not old, then, as it’s easy to assume. I’ve come across a claim that he had an illegitimate son before he married, but, actually, that doesn’t stand up to scrutiny.

And Katherine: where did she end up? Well, she was a Dorset girl living in Wiltshire. Two of England’s wealthiest, most powerful nunneries were in Dorset and Wiltshire: Shaftesbury and Wilton. But whether a repudiated wife from a prominent family would be sent to a major house, as befitted her origins, or, on the contrary, precisely because of those origins, buried away somewhere obscure, I don’t know. Forty pounds per year, though, compares favourably with the Prioress of Shaftesbury’s pension of twenty pounds per year, and the Prioress of Wilton’s ten, almost a decade later at the time of dissolution.


Reading and thinking my way through all this, I began developing my own take on what might’ve happened that was so catastrophic at Wolfhall in the mid 1520s. Something was dawning on me. Dates are patchy, but Jane Seymour was most likely around fifteen when her brother married and seventeen when the terrible situation blew up at home. Mid-teens when her father was accused of fathering a child with his own daughter-in-law.

What do we know of the Jane who endured this calamity? Almost nothing – which actually, I think, tells us a lot. She was the eldest girl in a large family, but with three older brothers: heavily imposed-upon in the domestic sphere, almost certainly, and overshadowed. Those brothers of hers were notably handsome, but to judge from the Holbein portrait of Jane when she became queen, she was – to say the least – no looker. There’s no record of her having travelling or lived away from home during her girlhood nor having been educated beyond, presumably, the basics. In adulthood, she was, reputedly, traditional in her religious leanings, and her needlework was much admired. She was a spinster in her late twenties when the king turned his attention to her. I don’t think it’d be too wide of the mark to describe her as shy.

A shy, plain fifteen year old joined at Wolfhall by the bride of the brother who was fast becoming a star. It intrigued me, the relationship between those two girls. Jane was at a formative age, and I couldn’t help but imagine her in thrall to Katherine. What, then, did Jane know – or not know – of what went wrong? In the aftermath, when Katherine was despatched to a nunnery, Jane went to Catherine of Aragon, that gentlest and most pious of queens: Jane appears in records of the queen’s household from around this time. Which, ironically, was exactly when the king made his first, tentative move to persuade his queen to stand down, step aside, pursue a religious vocation. How bizarre that Jane should come – perhaps for refuge, perhaps for rehabilitation – from a home in which exactly that had just happened, only to have to witness the same all over again, but writ large. Very large, because Catherine of Aragon was no Dorset girl; she was a princess of the Holy Roman Empire, crowned queen of England, loyal spouse of two decades’ standing and mother of the sole heir to the throne. She had right on her side and she knew it. She wasn’t going to go quietly. Thus ensued seven long desperate years of resistance, which Jane, close at hand, would have witnessed and lived through.

Before long, what had started for me as a fascination with how and why Katherine Filliol was more or less wiped from history had grown to become as much about her plain, shy little sister-in-law, Jane Seymour: how and why Jane had ended up best able of all the women in England to take the throne the day after Anne Boleyn had knelt for the executioner.

In search of Katherine:

Katherine Filliol disappeared almost five hundred years ago. Except that she didn’t, quite, because a trace of her remain in a few facts: she married Edward Seymour when they were both in their early twenties and had two sons, but a few years later she was banished to a nunnery and the boys disinherited.

Edward did a characteristically good job when he banished his wife: there’s almost nothing, officially, to know. The historical record gives us only Katherine’s father’s will, leaving her an annual pension of £40 on condition that she live in ‘some honest house of Relegion of wymen’. Within a decade, Edward had re-married – meaning that Katherine had either become a nun or died – and altered his succession in favour of the children of his second wife.

It’s a marginal note in Vincent’s Baronage, from as long as a century afterwards, which gives us, in Latin, the rumour that Katherine was ‘repudiated’ because, after her marriage, she had ‘known the father’.

Katherine’s father-in-law keeps himself to himself, historically-speaking: Justice of the Peace for Wiltshire and Warden of Savernake Forest, he was rarely at court, not even when his eldest daughter, Jane, became Henry V111’s third queen. Edward was the one making the family name: clever, cautious Edward who, in the twenty years following his first wife’s disappearance, became de facto ruler of England during the reign of the boy-king Edward V1 and ‘The Good Duke’ beloved of the common people, before it all went wrong as, in those days, it so often did.

Of Katherine, there’s no word after 1527, not even of which nunnery took her in.

Having resolved to write about her, about what might have gone so very wrong for her and her young husband, I decided that if the history books couldn’t give me anything, I’d go and look. Literally. I’d get up from my desk and go to where Katherine was born and grew up, and if I looked hard enough or perhaps inventively enough, surely there’d be something. There had to be something. Anything. A view to which she habitually woke. A church or chapel in which she used to sit, freezing. A memorial, bearing the names of people who’d known her and, once, had hopes for her.

She was born around the turn of the fifteenth century at “Woodlands, Horton, Dorset”. Open your map and there it is: Woodlands, a hamlet just outside Horton in south east Dorset. ‘Woodlands’, though? An odd address, because prominent residences of the time were usually styled ‘house’ or ‘manor’ or indeed ‘manor house’. None of my trusty histories of the area mention a Woodlands Manor House. It was there on my map, though, and the internet provided a postcode.

A new build, then, or re-build? Whatever, I decided, it’d be worth a look. And, anyway, there’d be a church nearby, a fair chance of seeing the Filliol name in stone. And up the road, the other side of Salisbury, was Seymour-country. A trip was shaping up for me: a Tudor-themed mini-roadtrip.

So, one fine, late-autumn day, I filled my flask and set off.

Woodlands isn’t wooded, now, if it ever was. It’s open countryside; unremarkable, in a nice way. Nor was the hamlet as I’d anticipated: it’s one long road stretching almost to the nearby conurbation, strung with sizeable modern houses. There’s something like a green, but not particularly green-shaped. No pub, no school. Church? A Methodist chapel was what I saw first, then a church which looked like a chapel: low, brick-built, late Victorian. And locked.

Strolling, I saw eighteenth- and nineteenth century terraced cottages that would’ve been home once to farm labourers, and mid- twentieth century council-built housing. There’s an old schoohouse, now a private residence but with those telltale big windows and the giveaway name. An intriguingly round-shaped house (‘Round House’, no less) is reputed, I discovered later, to have been the workshop of Huguenot silk weavers. Rising above a hedge close to the church were impressive, rickety chimney stacks. The Old Vicarage, its listing informs us, is partly sixteenth century in origin. My guess is that it’s an even older something else because you can’t have a vicarage without a church and nowhere can I find reference to any church before the late-Victorian one provided by the Countess of Shaftesbury. The schoolhouse, too, was Shaftesbury-gifted. This might’ve been Filliol land at one time but later became Shaftesbury-land.

Huguenots and Shaftesburys, but no Filliols, or none that I could see. Next stop, the Manor House. It’s off the road to Horton, down a long, gated drive shared with a golf course bearing the charming name of ‘Remedy Oak’ in commemoration of a visit of the boy-king Edward V1, son of Henry V111, who sat beneath an oak to dispense his healing touch to needy locals. (Something Tudor!) The touch of a king was believed to cure scrofula, an infection of the lymph glands in the neck, usually tuberculous in origin: one of the scourges of earlier centuries. (I’m fairly regularly asked, would you believe, if I’d like to have lived in Tudor times…)

Stuck to one of the gateposts was a planning permission application for solar panels. Those gates were open and, after what was no doubt some rather shifting-looking deliberation, I braved the driveway. But further along, that Manor House, with other suggestively-named residences (‘The Coachhouse’ etc), was behind a second, entryphone-controlled gate, so I got no more than tantalising glimpses of Tudor-like chimney stacks – in much better nick, though, than the one near the church.

Was this where Katherine grew up, long before solar panels and entryphones? – if not in that house, then on its site? Here and there in the walls of the existing houses, I’ve since read, are remnants of ‘a major house’ dating from the ‘early sixteenth century’. But that’s the latest Katherine was born, and anyway the sources attribute that house to a Mr Henry Hastings, who post-dates the Filliols. And something else: in that gated complex were buildings named as if they’d once been part of a farm. Every manor house of the time had its own farm, but not necessarily on a shared site. Those farms were of considerable importance in any locality at a time when farms were what mattered, when most of us worked on them. Over the centuries, ‘Manor farm’, ‘manor farmhouse’ and ‘house’ tend to have been used interchangeably. So, what I was peering at, through that gate, might not have originally been a manor house but its farm: a big farmhouse that had become, over time, a des res. Mind you, it’s just as likely that a fine house fallen into disrepair would become, in time, a farmhouse. When I was back home, I learned from a local history that Woodlanders from the century before last used to refer to ‘Woodlands Farm’ as ‘Woodlands House’. See what I mean? It’s a short step from ‘Woodlands House’ to ‘Woodlands Manor House’. Maybe ‘Woodlands Manor House’ was actually, in time gone by, just ‘Woodlands Farm’… although, conversely, of course, it’s just as likely that what became ‘Woodlands Farm’ was once ‘Woodlands House’.

Well, I could stand there at that gate and go around in circles, as it were, or I could take the road to Horton in search of something more tangible. Horton is home to a specactular edifice, if not one for which I was looking: Horton Tower, an eighteenth century folly, nowadays housing telecommunications paraphenalia. The village is suitable village-like: plenty of wisteria-roped cottages, tumbeldown farm buildings, a Victorian schoolhouse, a vicarage and an ‘abbey house’ (its eighteenth century frontage hiding, says its listing, a fifteenth century timber frame)…. and an old church. Not old enough, though, I saw, for my purposes. This one was Georgian.

The booklet on sale inside the fetchingly-named St Wolfrida’s informed me that it was built on the site of a medieval church, in turn built on the site of the church of a Benedictine Abbey. Some of the north wall – I was pretty sure I could see where – dates from the twelfth or thirteenth centuries. A notice on the wall mentioned, as if in passing, that under the belfy of the old church were memorials to the Filliol family.

There they were, right beneath my feet. Or some of them, or something of them. Beneath my very feet! So near and yet so far. I stood there, confounded.

Then I looked up, and, in front of me, reinstated on the wall is something which does remain of the old building: a beautifully-lettered seventeenth-century plaque erected by an aunt in memory of a Victoria Uvedale who died when she was “6 years and 9 months”. The booklet tells how the memorial was discovered upside down in the floor of the old Manor Farm Dairy (..which later became the vicarage… See what I mean about buildings coming in and out of different uses, making use of whatever is to hand?). It was good to see it there, to honour the wish of Victoria’s bereaved aunt, to think for a moment of that little girl now over three hundred years gone.

Actually, there’s something in St Wolfrida’s that’s far older than Victoria’s once-lost memorial: two stunning effigies (one marble, the other stone) of a knight and his lady. He was the Norman Sir Giles Braose – of, among other places, so says the booklet, Woodland Manor! – and she, it’s believed, was his first wife, Beatrice. She – in stone – has aged less well than he has, but we should be grateful for anything at all of her because, my booklet says, ‘female effigies of this period are uncommon’. The couple are believed to date from the very end of the thirteenth or very beginning of the fourteenth century.

And that’s why I love old – and not so old – churches: you walk off the street (or, more likely, lane) and there, for your delectation, will be something from perhaps almost a millenium ago. No charge to see it, and you’ve almost always got it to yourself for as long as you want.

Braoses, but no Filliols. Reluctantly, I accepted that I was going to have to give up on the Filliols for the time being and drive north in search of the Seymours. So, after buying a jar of honey from outside a cottage, I set off for Savernake Forest.

Savernake Forest is true to its name, it is wooded, or at least in parts. ‘Forest’ didn’t used to mean exclusively or densely wooded, but, instead, areas of copse and scrubland, ideal for hunting. Savernake Forest hasn’t changed in essence for many hundreds of years. It’s ancient forest (the New Forest is, by comparison, what it claims to be), and England’s only ancient forest to be in private hands – the Earl of Cardigan’s, since you ask. The same hands, in a sense, since 1066: it’s never been sold, but passed down the generations, thirty-one to date. It’s currently leased to the Foresty Commission and we members of the public are welcome every day of the year except one. For one day each year – usually the first working day of the year – its roads are blocked, which preserves its private status.

Edward’s father, Sir John Seymour, was Warden of this forest and lived with his family at Wolfhall. (Nothing to do with wolves, by the way, but a corruption of the Saxon name ‘Ulf). Wolfhall was to where Katherine Filliol probably came as a bride. All the usual sources insist that the Seymour’s old home no longer exists and that no one knows where it stood, athough the quickest of searches will turn up a ‘Wolf Hall Manor’ and ‘Wolf Hall Farmhouse’ near Burbage, both of which have sixteenth century components. There are rumours that a house once known as The Laundry might have been just that to the old Wolfhall – but then again, that, too, is disputed.

In the light of all this, I wasn’t looking for any house. Rather, I’d decided to go to the church in Great Bedwyn, which has some stained glass said to have come from the old Wolfhall, and an impressive memorial to Sir John and his children.

Great Bedwyn is nowadays a large village (shops, pubs, a school), the buildings dating mostly from the eighteenth century and later. The Church – St Mary’s – is, says its booklet, ‘one of the largest and finest in the district’, Early English in origin but built on the site of something earlier, much altered over the centuries.

As well as those fragments of stained glass – ‘badges’, coats of arms – there is on the chancel wall a small brass memorial of Jane and Edward’s eldest brother, John, who died at around the age of ten. He’s depicted full-length, standing. Brasses tend to be generic, though – no one’s going to learn anything of him by peering at his face. What’s interesting, I think, is that Edward wasn’t the eldest son until relatively late in his childhood. To me, he seems the quintessential eldest child – ambitious and organised – but actually it was a mantle he took on in his later childhood; he wasn’t – in his earliest years – raised as such. Well, not unless, I suppose, his older brother was unwell long-term or otherwise compromised and unlikely to survive to adulthood or to make a success of it. Who knows?

Sir John, father of the family, is on excellent form, lying in his armour. Above the tomb is a fulsome inscription (I’m not sure I’ve ever seen lengthier), giving us a potted history of all the children (“Six Sonnes and Fower Daughters”), including the ones who didn’t survive to adulthood. We learn, for example, that Elizabeth (who did survive and then some) was ‘first maryed to Sir Henry Ughtred, Knight after to Gregorie, Lorde, Cromwell [Thomas Cromwell’s son] and last to Jhon, Lord Sainet John of Basinge, after Marquess of Winchester.”

But the tomb and its inscription don’t date from the death of Sir John in 1536, nor the lifetimes of any of his children. Instead, it was the project of one of his grandsons, who, in 1590, had Sir John disinterred from ‘Eston priorie church’ – tradtional resting place of the Seymours – after the site had been ‘ruined [and] much defased’ during ‘the Mynoritie of Edwarde’ (the 1540/50s, the later stages of the Reformation). The Seymour who had this impressive tomb built was clearly keen that Sir John Seymour be remembered well; indeed, it’s his stated aim, up there in that inscription: ‘for the better Continuans of his Memore’.

A notice near the tomb explains that no one knows exactly where Easton Priory once stood. Back in the car, I peered at the map. There’s a village called Easton Royal, which seemed a fair bet. Despite longing for a nice cup of tea in nearby Marlborough, I couldn’t resist a dash to Easton Royal in the dying light. It’s a mere handful of miles from Great Bedwyn but the gentle Vale of Pewsey makes for very different countryside. The village itself is chocolate box, a profusion of thatch. The church, by contrast, might best be described as unobtrusive. Open, though, even at the late hour: there’s that to say for it.

Inside, a lovely 1950s plaque commemorates the Seymour family for all it did over the for the church and priory. In fact, this plain little church – lively with the scrabblings of a mouse, when I was there – has had a chequered history. The current building is late-Tudor, Victorian-rebuilt. A medieval church had fallen into such disrepair by the fourteenth century that villagers requested to be able to use, instead, the priory church. The priory, a sign told me (no equivocation), had been sited across the lane. Nothing remains to see: just the thatched houses in the gloom, and, behind them, fields. It burned to the ground at the end of the fifteenth century and was re-built only to be in ruins again within a couple of decades. From a later read-up at home, I learned there were usually between two and five priests in residence, attended by a couple of servant-women. I must admit I’d been envisioning something like Rievaulx: hundreds of monks, a herb garden, infirmary, library. The reality of the majority of religious houses, though, it seems, was more likely this Father Ted-like scenario, quite possibly without the laughs.

That, then, was where Sir John chose to lay until Judgement Day, only to be upped and shifted fifty years later. His daughter, Jane, who died after giving birth to Henry V111’s longed-for heir, lies beside the king in St George’s Chapel, Windsor. Her brother, Edward is probably stowed – the two supposedly traiterous pieces of him – beneath the floor of the chapel at the Tower of London. No one knows the final resting place of his first wife, Katherine Fillol, as elusive in death as she was in life. Perhaps she was buried where she died – perhaps at nearby Shaftesbury or Wilton Abbeys. Of Wilton Abbey, nothing remains; of Shaftesbury, a few stones in a garden. It’s not impossible, though, I suppose, that she was reclaimed in death by her family and buried alongside her forebears in the old, subsequently built-over St Wolfrida’s. Her father isn’t there, though: in his will, he requested burial at Grey Friairs in Salisbury. If you look for Grey Friars in Salisbury, now, what you’ll find, in the lee of the cathedral, is Greyfriars Close – 1960s blocks of flats – and a research paper about excavation of part of a wall in 1966. Grey Friars is gone, itself buried. Yet I imagine that Sir William was laid to rest there in as much splendour as he and his family could afford, because that was what people did, back then – especially those eschewing their local church for a friary. What mattered to people at that time, above all, was to be remembered; you could even say that it was, in a way, what pre-Reformation people lived for, because being prayed for by the living would facilitate your passage to Heaven, would help save your soul. Sir William would’ve died entrusting his everlasting life to those friars, who had been on that site for so many hundreds of years. He couldn’t have seen – nor did anyone – how, in less than a decade, they’d be gone.

Gone, now, any sign of them, probably many times over, under five hundred years of layers, the topmost of tarmac. And that’s the closest I’ve come, so far, physically, to Katherine: the road beneath which, almost certainly, lie the remains of her father. What I learned from my fieldtrip is that there’s no rhyme or reason to what survives five hundred years and what – or who – is lost to us for ever.


Extra material for The Lady Of Misrule

Nine things you (probably) didn’t know about the Nine Days Queen

1. She wasn’t queen for nine days. (Let’s start with the biggie.) Not strictly speaking. There were nine days from her being proclaimed to her being detained; but there’d been four days before that, from Edward V1’s hushed-up death, from The king is dead to Long live the queen. Add it all together and you get unlucky thirteen.


2. We don’t know Jane’s birth date, nor are there any authenticated likenesses of her. Historians are pretty sure that she was sixteen when she came to the throne, and contemporary accounts have her as diminutive. Don’t be fooled, though: her intellect was formidable – she was, already, at sixteen, a scholar of Europe-wide repute – as was her ambition, albeit for her country rather than for herself. She was committed to the reformist cause and although she hadn’t wanted to be queen, she did very much want a protestant England.


3. She was England’s rightful queen. Or you could say that, and you’d be kind of right. The late king had chosen her as his successor, and he was entitled to do so. His father – Henry V111 – had nominated the princesses Mary and Elizabeth to follow in line if the boy-king died without an heir of his own… but the princesses were their father’s choice rather than his legitimate heirs. He’d bastardised them in his convoluted efforts to wipe his first two marriages from history; and because they were deemed illegitimate, they had no legal claim to the throne. But Henry V111 had passed a law so that a king could choose his successor(s), which then allowed him to ‘choose’ Mary and Elizabeth, to reinstate them to the line of succession without his losing face (something that he was never keen to do..) by having to backtrack over those marriages. The problem was, as the law stood, any subsequent king could then also make such a choice. Which Edward did. (And it seems he really did: the evidence is that he worked at his choice over some months before his death – this was no deathbed panic.) For reasons which remain a mystery (his half-sisters’ supposed illegitimacy? Mary’s catholicism?), Edward chose Jane, the eldest child of his cousin.


4. As queen, Jane refused to grant royal status to her young husband; he wouldn’t be king, she said, which caused an almighty row with her powerful in-laws. She stuck to her guns. Because nowhere in the late king’s ‘device’ (as his kind-of-will was known) had it said anything about her husband being king. Married though she (very recently) was, Jane alone was to be sovereign. She suggested that her husband become the Duke of Clarence. Or, presumably, lump it.


5. Jane’s position, as queen, looked unassailable. No one saw Mary Tudor’s victory coming. Because Mary and whose army? Mary Tudor was a country-residing gentlewoman. Jane had the support of all of England’s councillors and of the church, the Royal Guard, the Navy, and she held the Tower, which was the nation’s armoury.


6. When it all went wrong, Jane didn’t need taking to the Tower – she was already there. She’d arrived shortly after having been proclaimed, as was tradition: the new monarch secures the Tower. (And now Mary was on her way – the common people of England lining the roadsides to cheer her on – to do just that.) All Jane’s supposed supporters and her family fled the Tower (her father having taken down the canopy above her throne); she was left there with her husband and mother-in-law. Divested of her small change, she was escorted across the green into custody.


7. The circumstances of her detention were comfortable. She lived in the house of the Gentleman-goaler, Nathaniel Partridge. A friend of Partridge’s who came to dine, one evening, was surprised to find Jane there at the table, and he left an account of her as informal in her manner, chatty, eager for news of the outside world, the fast-changing religio-political situation.


8. No one expected Jane to be executed. Her trial – and the inevitable indictment – was a formality. Mary Tudor – and this is something you probably didn’t know about Mary Tudor – was at this point considered merciful to a fault. Jane would be held for a while, then – when Mary’s reign was better-established, perhaps married, perhaps with an heir on the way – quietly released.


9. It was Jane’s father who sealed her fate. Remember him? – taking down her canopy, telling her that she was no longer queen before hot-footing it to freedom and basking in some of Mary Tudor’s mercifulness. Well, he was stupid enough to get himself back in trouble, a mere five months later. He was involved in an uprising which almost certainly wasn’t in favour of Jane – there was never any mention of Jane, and, really, why would there have been? Jane was a spent force, a convicted traitor. The rebels probably favoured Elizabeth, Mary’s protestant half-sister. But the clear, central involvement of Jane’s father in the plot showed that she would remain a focus – however unwilling – for potential future dissent. The Wyatt rebellion had been very serious indeed: London under seige, the Tower bombarded, everyone inside Mary’s palace – her ladies, her servants – barricading the doors and arming themselves with whatever was to hand. It had been a very near miss for Mary. From then onwards, everything had to change. Order had to be asserted and Jane Grey, handily already convicted as a traitor, paid the price.


The History Girls Interview

The History Girls: Interview with Suzannah Dunn by Katherine Clements

I first met Suzannah Dunn in 2008 when she was my tutor on an Arvon course. That week was an important turning point for me – Suzannah, an insightful and inspiring teacher, encouraged me to begin writing the novel that would eventually become my debut, The Crimson Ribbon. And she’s been there, a friend and mentor, supporting, commiserating and cheerleading ever since.

Suzannah’s own writing career began with contemporary fiction. She wrote six critically acclaimed novels and a short story collection before her first historical novel, The Queen of Subtleties – a retelling of the story of Anne Boleyn – was published in 2004. Since then she’s written five bestselling novels about the Tudors. Her latest, The Lady of Misrule, tells the story of Lady Jane Grey’s imprisonment in the Tower and is out now in paperback.

You can spot Suzannah’s grounding in contemporary fiction in her historical work. Her use of modern language is both brave and unusual, sometimes dividing opinion between readers who prefer a more traditional approach and those who enjoy the immediacy it creates. I’m definitely in the latter camp. What I like most about her writing is how she sheds new light on well-known stories. Like all the best historical writers she had the knack of making history feel fresh and relevant, showing us the inner workings of her character’s lives with deft pen strokes and stunning prose. I think she does historical fiction like no one else.

I asked her a few questions about her work and her love of history…

You’re best known for writing about the Tudors. What drew you to that period in the first place and why have you chosen to stay there?

I wasn’t drawn to the period, I was drawn to a person: Anne Boleyn. At the time, (c2000), I was wondering what/whom next to write about. I was stuck, and I remember saying to myself (I know, I know, but it’s a lonely life, isn’t it, being a novelist), ‘Well, what story interests you?’, which is interesting in itself, because as far as I am aware I’d never before started with the notion of ‘story’; I’d always previously taken characters/a dynamic as my starting point.

Well, anyway, the answer that came to mind was ‘the story of Anne Boleyn’: her rise and fall. Which, of course, is all about character – hers, Henry’s, Catherine’s – and dynamics. (Well, er, that and the Reformation.)

I don’t know why she came to mind, because although the Tudors are ‘always with us’ in this country, they’d been having a relatively low-key couple of decades (this was before The Other Boleyn Girl and long before Wolf Hall); it had been quiet for a while in the Tudor Dept.

I dismissed the Anne Boleyn idea because I wasn’t a historical novelist and didn’t even read within that genre. I hadn’t the first idea as to how to go about writing a historical novel. But then, a day later, I thought to myself, ‘So, don’t do it as a historical novel.’ But what did I mean by that? I didn’t know! Should I do an updated version, a ‘modern dress’ version?

Well, I worked that one out, eventually, to my own satisfaction if not to everybody else’s, but, as you can see, it wasn’t that I was ‘drawn to the Tudors’; I was drawn to Anne Boleyn and, at that point, for me, she just happened to be a Tudor.

I had to do a lot of reading because I knew next to nothing about her and her world, and I loved it (it was literally a whole new world, for me!). So, when my agent suggested I write another novel set in that period, I set about it happily (The Sixth Wife). After that, my contracts didn’t specify Tudors but there was a verbal agreement that I would continue in that vein.

But what did I so love about that ‘whole new world’? I suspect there’s a clue in the term ‘early modern’: a period on the cusp of what we might recognise as modernity; an intriguing mix of alien and familiar (and isn’t that what’s working for us as readers with a good piece of writing? – that mix of inevitable and surprising, that feeling of ‘Oh, yes, it IS like that, isn’t it! That IS how that is.’)

But a big motivating factor for me is myth-busting. I do of course recognise that it’s not a case of ‘truth’ and then, tagging along somewhere behind it, ‘myth’; I do of course know that all history is reconstruction and, as such, is a product of the age in which that history is being told. But the Tudors – potent as they are in British popular culture – are prime prey for myth-making. With the Anne Boleyn novel, I set out on an admittedly rather old-fashioned mission to Get It Right, and, frankly, getting it right remains important to me.

You began your career writing contemporary fiction and short stories. Why did you make the move to writing about history?

I suppose I was trying to write the kind of novel about Anne Boleyn that I’d like to read. And perhaps that meant Getting It ‘Literary’, too. At the time I started writing The Queen of Subtleties, (a decade before Wolf Hall was published), the Tudors had, as far as I knew, never been anywhere but within the domain of genre historical fiction. I don’t know how to write any differently from how I’ve always written, and prior to these so-called historical novels of mine, I’d been positioned as a writer of literary fiction. And I was (broadly speaking) a reader of literary fiction. Where were the novels about Tudors that I might want to read? I set out to write them, I suppose.

I don’t write ‘about history’; but the people I write about have in some cases said or done things or had things done to them that are a matter of historical record. Nor, to my mind, do I write about ‘the past’, because fiction-writing for me is made up of writing about (re-imagining, recreating on the page) small moments, and those moments have never actually happened (or, if they did, we can never know about it!) – the way the air smells on a particular morning, the way the shadows fall during a particular dusk, the way someone smiles at you as they enter the room. That’s what concerns me, as a writer – that’s what I’m writing about. Any framework of historical ‘facts’ – this happened, that happened – isn’t any different, for me, than the frameworks I had when I was writing contemporary-set novels.

In your Tudor novels you use modern language, a decision that seems to elicit divided opinion among readers. Was it a deliberate choice and have you ever felt pressure to tone it down?

This is going to be another long answer, sorry: hold onto your hats! (or, hold your fingertip on the PgDn key…) It was indeed deliberate. I do have my reasons, such as they are, the main one being that we don’t know how sixteenth century people spoke. We know how they wrote – or how some did, those who could, and in the kinds of documents that have come to us down the centuries (wills, court documents etc). There are letters, too, here and there, but letter-writing has always had its own conventions and probably never more so than when writing was new to much of the population. Letters weren’t exactly dashed off. (Actually, practically, they couldn’t be – writing with a quill was a laborious business.) None of those written documents tell us much about how people spoke.

Even nowadays we speak very differently from how we write, which you’ll know if you’ve ever had to deal with transcripts. Consciously and unconsciously, we do a lot of tidying up to articulate ourselves on a page, which is of course largely what the skill of writing is. So, it’s not just for historical novelists, this issue of how best to ’translate’ speech and thoughts into the written word. Think of regional or other societal variations… On the one hand, it can seem ridiculous for some characters or narrators to be speaking so-called Queen’s English, but, then again, is it any better to confine them to phonetic spelling?

The answer is, of course, that there’s no answer. There are no hard and fast rules – every writer feels his or her way with each voice to a position somewhere on a spectrum, and hopes that readers will go along with it.

And, actually, talking of variation: there would never have been any single ‘Tudor-speak’, either.

Still, most writers want at the very least to give an impression of people in the past speaking differently from how they might speak now. So, how can we do that? Well, we can make an educated guess – and some guesses, in historical fiction, are more educated than others, by which I’m not being rude, merely recognising that some writers take it as a more pressing or diverting issue than others do, and fair enough, each to his or her own. So, in historical fiction, we’ve had everything from slightly stilted dialogue (the avoidance of contractions, for example – ‘do not’ rather than ‘don’t’ – which for some reason I’ve never fathomed is supposed to be old-fashioned, as if people in the past didn’t use contractions) to full-on cod-Tudor, with, along the way, sprinklings of archiac words or expressions and subtle differences in cadence and inflection.

The academic Laura Saxton makes a distinction between ‘accuracy’ and ‘authenticity’ which I find useful. Take the televised Wolf Hall: the dark cloaks in which the men skulked and swished. That felt right… right? It was authentic, yes? What it wasn’t, as far as historians can ascertain, is accurate. The clothes of gentlemen of the court, at that time, were brightly coloured. But that’s not what twenty-first century viewers expect; it would feel wrong, it’s out of step with the twenty-first century popular understanding of the Henrician court. We’re not going to take Hilary Mantel’s Cromwell seriously if he’s dressed in pink silk.

For me, it’s similar with vocabulary. There isn’t a writing day of mine that goes by without my having checked the origins of a handful of words or expressions to see if they were in use in the sixteenth century… not that I won’t necessarily use them if they weren’t, but at least I’m then making a conscious decision, not a ‘mistake’.

Can I ask you: which of these two words ‘feels right’ to you, as a Tudor word? ‘Brat’ and ‘wrongfooted’.

Well, Brat is sixteenth century in origin, but the first recorded use of Wrongfoot was in 1928.

So much for ‘accuracy’. As with telly-watching, though, authenticity is at least as important to the reading experience and I recognise that for some readers the dialogue that my characters speak just seems ridiculous, it jarrs and ruins that crucial suspension of belief. I do understand that; honestly, I do; I sympathise! So why do I push it to an extreme, then? If there’s a spectrum from cod olde English to contemporary, why do I set up camp at the far end of it?

Well, many – most? – writers of historical fiction want to stress the difference between ‘then’ and ‘now’. That’s where the story is, the drama. And surely the same can be said for many readers, too: part of the pleasure lies in the strangeness. But what draws me isn’t the difference but the similarities. It’s not what I’d expect of myself, being a believer that each of us is largely a product of our of time and place… but, well, there you are: I don’t see myself as writing about Tudors but about characters who just happen to be Tudor.

My job as a fiction writer, as I see it, is, basically, to make things feel real (and for ‘things’, read ‘people’, ‘relationships’, ‘dynamics’, ‘situations’… anything, everything). I want to have my readers feel that they are there, in a particular situation with particular people. The last thing I want to do is flag up differences, because that – I feel – creates distance, and the characters become curiosities. When you are reading one of my novels, I want you to be there, I want that to be your world, your people.

I have to admit that when I started out, when I began The Queen of Subtleties, I was following my nose. One of the two narrative voices was to be Anne Boleyn’s and what struck me from my reading of her was that she was forthright, outspoken, uncompromising and, above all, for her time, ‘modern’. So, how was I going to re-create her on the page? Well, not by having her speaking mannered ‘old-fashioned language’, it seemed to me. This was a woman who, on at least one occasion, had foreign ambassadors so disgusted by her language that in defiance of protocol they turned their backs on her and left the room. In a situation such as that, what would I have her saying? As I saw it, ‘Christ’s fut’ or anything like that just wouldn’t cut it. So, in the novel, she ‘speaks’ in up-to-date language. Because, in her time, her world, that was what she did.

When I’d finished that novel, my agent and editor each compiled a list of words which had, for them, jarred: words that had gone too far. I was grateful for their efforts and I did study those lists, but in the end decided to ignore them because, otherwise, I’d be writing by committee; the result would be cautious, mealy-mouthed, which was exactly what Anne Boleyn wasn’t. I’d had a vision for that book, and I decided I had to stay true to it.

And, on the whole, I liked the result, which was why I went on to write similarly in subsequent books although not as yet as uncompromisingly because none of those subsequent characters have quite required it. I do understand that for some readers the modern language ‘gets in the way’. But that’s how the stilted voices of many other historical novels seem to me.

In your latest novel, The Lady of Misrule, you’ve chosen to introduce a fictional character through which to tell the story of Lady Jane Grey’s imprisonment in The Tower. Mixing fictional with real life characters is a device you’ve used before and one I’ve employed in my own writing. What do you think are the benefits and drawbacks in writing about real people from history?

Depends what you mean by ‘fictional’ and ‘real’. Historians seem to be in agreement that one of the women attending Lady Jane in the Tower was probably an Elizabeth Tilney. So, it’s likely that she existed, even if we know nothing about her. But, then, what do we know about Lady Jane Grey? Very little, as it happens. And what do we know, frankly, of anyone long-dead? Or, indeed, anyone? It’s all reconstruction, isn’t it? It’s just that with some people, some characters, we might claim to have more to go on.

And as for what we have to go on: I love doing the reading, because for me it’s like hearing a load of gossip (sorry, historians! – I know full well it’s not gossip, but bear with me!) in that having heard what’s been said, I have to decide what I, myself, think. I’m listening very carefully – weighing up the various accounts, using my own judgement, trying my utmost to get it right, to do that person justice.

We all know so much about the Tudors. One of the things you do so well is re-telling these stories in a way that keeps the reader on the edge of the seat, even though they know the ending. How do you maintain a sense of tension? Any tips?

You’re very sweet, thank you, but I’m laughing because even if it’s true – that I do keep readers on edges of seats – I have absolutely no idea how I do it! I mean, it’s just the usual business of story-writing; it’s what we do, or try to. If it’s working, I suspect it’s because we’re working moment by moment (see above, re: not writing about ‘the past’), because tension – any that there is – emerges from those moments; it’s not something that you can graft on, you can’t slap it on top of a scene.

Most of your books have female narrators and protagonists. Is representing women in history important to you?

To be entirely honest, I can’t remember how important it might have been to me back at the beginning, how much of a motivation, because now it’s become second nature, it’s become what I do. I’d say it’s perhaps more about unheard voices in general, though, for me, than specifically women…although, actually, I wouldn’t say that women’s ‘voices’ are ‘unheard’, nowadays, in historical fiction (quite the contrary). (The exception, it seems to me, is Hilary Mantel’s work: to my mind, she doesn’t really ‘do women’, in Wolf Hall and Bring Up The Bodies.)

Interestingly, this became something of an issue at a meeting at my publishers, last year: there was a brief, divisive, inconclusive discussion about how much to ‘push’ the ‘women’ angle of my books – could/should I be characterised as writing about women’s lives before or above and beyond writing about sixteenth century lives? As I say: inconclusive.

I do locate my fiction largely in the domestic sphere, which is where women have traditionally held the balance of power. So, there’s that.

The answer’s ‘Yes’, really, isn’t it.

Do you have a favourite historical place to visit? And why?

Not a particular favourite, I don’t think, but in general I love to visit churches, most of which (but not all) are old and in many cases very old indeed. I love it that I’m almost always alone when I’m visiting a church, and that I can get up close to – and dare to touch, even, perhaps, in the case of carvings – craftwork that might be a thousand years old (I’m thinking fonts, here). I love it that these beautiful buildings and their exquisite furnishings (I’m particularly interested in stained glass and wall paintings) are in practically every village in this country (as well as there being wonderful examples in some towns and cities, of course), and although I do realise that they are owned by the church (I don’t want to be naïve about this!), there’s still a sense, in my view, in which they belong to us, the common people.

Are there any other periods of history that intrigue you?

Well, I love it that I currently live on the site of an Iron Age hillfort and on the boundary of the grounds of a Roman villa. And one of my absolute favourite places in the world – I doubt I will ever tire of visiting it – is the Early People’s gallery in the National Museum of Scotland.

Can you tell us what you’re working on now?

Indeed I can, and thank you for asking! I’m back with Mary Tudor – I just can’t leave her alone, can I (..but in view of some of what I said above about myth-busting, perhaps you can guess why). I’m back with her but also with her half-sister, Elizabeth: the novel in progress focuses (well, if it’s possible to focus with a sideways look) on the drastically difficult relationship between the two half-sisters when Mary came to the throne. The ‘sideways look’ is more sideways than in any of my previous historical novels; this novel is about a laundress from Mary’s household who is smuggled into Elizabeth’s to act as an informer.

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Extra material for Alys Twist

Charged with conspiracy and about to be escorted to the Tower of London, Elizabeth begged to be allowed to write to the Queen. In what has become known as the ‘Tide Letter’, she protested her innocence and implored her half-sister to hear her out in person. In this, she was ultimately unsuccessful, but the letter-writing did buy her a little time. The tide had turned before she had finished, so she couldn’t be taken to the Tower until the following day.

Elizabeth’s prospects were bleak. From the day of the Tide Letter, and for the rest of her sister’s reign, staying alive would be pretty much all that she could do. Throughout England, too, it seems to me, there was a collective holding of breath, a praying for the tide of history to turn.

Mere months earlier, it had all started so well. Mary had come unexpectedly to the throne on a wave of popular goodwill. It is said that England likes an underdog, and Mary Tudor had taken a couple of decades of very public kickings. Now, against all the odds, this persecuted and disparaged middle-aged spinster ascended the throne that was, in the eyes of the people, rightfully hers as Henry VIII’s elder daughter. All was right with the world after twenty years of strife, it seemed, and England rejoiced. Mary’s fundamental mistake was to interpret this goodwill as a mandate to turn back time twenty years and return England to Catholicism.

It has always baffled me that Mary’s catastrophic five-year reign and her relentless persecution of the half-sister who then became Elizabeth I has barely stirred the public imagination. It strikes me as a tale ripe for telling. Mary Tudor was England’s first-ever ruling queen; and her heir, too, was an unmarried woman. There were conspiracies and rebellions, and the burning of ‘heretics’ on a scale unprecedented in England. Elizabeth was imprisoned in the Tower, then – when the charge couldn’t be made to stick – held in rather bizarre circumstances under house arrest in Oxfordshire. Then came Mary’s pitifully protracted delusion that she was pregnant, and the widespread complicity in what could never have been other than a doomed deception. Yet for all the high drama, there is a sense in which time stopped during Mary’s reign, and England was suspended – hanging on by her fingernails, is how I think of it – because all anyone could do, in the end, was wait for Mary Tudor to die. It seems to me that what Elizabeth endured in this peculiar period, and how she endured it, made her the queen she then became.

The main character in my novel is a fiction, as are her companions and the situation in which they become involved. The sequence and much of the substance of the events depicted in the book, though, are a matter of historical record. Elizabeth did retreat to Ashridge for Christmas 1553; she was ordered back down to Whitehall in February 1554 and then taken to the Tower; from there she was taken to Woodstock and held in a gatehouse under the supervision of the hapless Sir Henry Bedingfield, while her own household, directed by wily Thomas Parry, commandeered the nearby Bull Inn.

As regards the working life of my fictional heroine, it was from Janet Arnold’s seminal Queen Elizabeth’s Wardrobe Unlock’d that I gleaned the following, although of course any errors or inaccuracies are my own: the Pigeons – father and son – kept the Wardrobe of Robe’s records during Mary’s reign; the Yeoman of the Wardrobe of Robes at this time was a Mr Hobbes; Mary’s tailor was a Mr Jones, and her silkwoman a Mrs Wilkinson, and fine Spanish needles were indeed made by a black man in Cheapside; Elizabeth at the time of her coronation had a laundress named Elizabeth Smith in her service, and later in her reign employed a laundress named Mistress Twist.

From the same work I learned about the location and organisation of the Wardrobe. The site remains tucked away in the City of London as the enchanting ‘Wardrobe Place’, although the original buildings were lost in the Great Fire. For other topographical details of London and Whitehall Palace I consulted the Agas map, which is believed to have been created in the early 1560s, just a few years after the period covered in this novel. Huggin Lane, Maidenhead Lane, Blunderbuss Alley, Budge Row and Pissing Alley or Lane are all gone from the City of London but the other streets mentioned in the novel still exist, although all are now lined by twentieth-century office blocks. The churches featuring in the novel still stand, with the exception of All Hallows on Bread Street, which was demolished in the nineteenth century.

Laurence/Lawrence Saunders did work for a while at All Hallows on Bread Street although in actuality he had moved on from there before his death and he was burned in Coventry. His wife and son are my invention. Coincidentally, he was brother to Sabine Johnson of Barbara Winchester’s Tudor Family Portrait (1955). What happens to Ollie in this novel is based closely on the case of nineteen-year-old apprentice William Hunter as detailed in Foxe’s Book of Martyrs.

My invention of Alys and her story arose in part from several intriguing details and comments that I came across during my reading. First, the often-quoted claim by the Venetian ambassador at Mary’s court: ‘No one comes or goes and nothing is spoken or done [in Elizabeth’s household] without the Queen’s knowledge.’ Then Janet Arnold’s observation, in Queen Elizabeth’s Wardrobe Unlock’d: ‘Tailors might be employed in espionage.’ She cites a confession regarding the stitching of notes into hosiery, although she states there is no evidence that any tailors working in Mary’s Wardrobe of Robes were involved in any such subterfuge. Next, David Starkey’s remark in Elizabeth: Apprenticeship, his vivid account of Elizabeth’s life before her ascent to the throne: ‘Women [of Elizabeth’s household] schemed and plotted with the best, and the ones who took the most risks were those who had already thrown over the restraints of marriage and family respectability.’ He quotes, too, Sir Henry Bedingfield, despairing of Francis Verney that ‘if there be a practice of ill, within all England, this Verney is privy to it’. And Starkey is one of several historians to make reference to the mysterious visit(s) of one of Elizabeth’s ladies to the French ambassador (in 1556, a little later than I have it); he suggests that these clandestine meetings were to explore the possibility of Elizabeth’s escape to France. England’s history would no doubt have been very different had she gone.

In the writing of this novel, I found the following publications particularly valuable, although any errors and inaccuracies are my own:

Queen Elizabeth’s Wardrobe Unlock’d by Janet Arnold (Leeds, 1988)

‘Of Crymsen Tissue: The Construction of a Queen. Identity, Legitimacy and the Wardrobe of Mary Tudor’ By Hilary Doda (MA thesis, Dalhousie University, 2011)

‘“Ye Shall Have It Clene”: Textile cleaning techniques in Renaissance Europe’ by Drea Leed, in Medieval Clothing and Textiles 2, edited by Robin Netherton and Gale R. Owen-Crocker (Woodbridge, 2006)

Tudor London Visited by Norman Lloyd Williams (London, 1991)

The A to Z of Elizabethan London, compiled by Adrian Prockter and Robert Taylor with introductory notes by John Fisher (Lympne and London, 1979)

Elizabeth: Apprenticeship by David Starkey (London, 2000)

The Kings Wardrobe’ and surrounding area, from the ‘Agas’ map of the City Of London, c1561-70

Why The Modern Language?

It’s not a mistake, not an oversight – I do realise English hasn’t always been spoken as it nowadays is. Nor is it some silly kind of attention-seeking, a for-the-sake-of-it bid to stand out. No, I do have my reasons, and the first is simply that we don’t know how sixteenth century people spoke. We know how they wrote – or at least how some of them wrote, those who could, and in the kinds of documents that have come to us down the centuries (wills, court documents etc). And, yes, there are letters, too, here and there, but letter-writing has always had its own conventions and probably never more so than when writing was new to much of the population. What I mean is, letters weren’t exactly dashed off. (Actually, practically, they couldn’t be – writing with a quill was a laborious business.) They can’t tell us all that much about how people spoke.

Even nowadays we speak very differently from how we write, which you’ll know if you’ve ever had to deal with transcripts. Consciously and unconsciously, we do a lot of tidying up to articulate ourselves on a page, and of course that’s largely what the skill of writing is – for all of us, in everyday life.

Not one just for novelists, then, this issue of how best to ’translate’ speech and thoughts into the written word. Not just for historical novelists, either, because think of regional or other societal variations… On the one hand, it can seem ridiculous for some characters or narrators to be speaking so-called Queen’s English, but, then again, is it any better to confine them to, say, phonetic spelling?

The answer is, of course, that there’s no answer. There are no hard and fast rules – every writer feels his or her way with each voice to a position somewhere on a spectrum, and hopes that readers will go along with it.

And, anyway, this talk of variations should serve to remind us that there would never have been any single ‘Tudor-speak’. Still, most writers want at the very least to give an impression of people in the past speaking differently from how they might speak if currently around and about. So, how to do it? Well, you can make an educated guess – and some guesses, in historical fiction, are more educated than others, by which I don’t mean to be rude but just to recognise that some writers take it as a more pressing or diverting issue than others do, and fair enough, each to his or her own. So, currently in historical fiction, we have everything from slightly stilted dialogue (the avoidance of contractions, for example – ‘do not’ rather than ‘don’t’ – which for some reason I’ve never fathomed is supposed to be old-fashioned, as if people in the past didn’t use contractions) to full-on cod-Tudor, with, along the way, sprinklings of archiac words or expressions and subtle differences in cadence and inflection. You could of course eschew guesses altogether – forget hankering after accuracy, if it’s impossible – and instead invent a language or style of speech that ‘feels right’.

‘Feels right’ is interesting. The academic Laura Saxton makes a distinction that I like, between ‘accuracy’ and ‘authenticity’. Cast your mind back to the BBC televised Wolf Hall, for example: the dark cloaks in which the men skulked and swished. That felt right… right? It was authentic, yes? Well, what it wasn’t, actually, as far as historians can ascertain, is accurate. The clothes of gentlemen of the court, at that time, were brightly coloured. But that’s not what twenty-first century viewers expect; it would feel wrong, it’s out of step with the twenty-first century popular understanding of Henry’s court. We’re not going to take Hilary Mantel’s Cromwell seriously if he’s dressed in pink silk.

I’d say it’s similar with vocabulary. Let me run this one past you: which of these two words ‘feels right’ to you, as a Tudor word? ‘Brat’ and ‘wrongfooted’. Just two from a list of words/expressions that I’ve been keeping, lately, for the purposes of this piece: words, the origins of which I’ve stopped to check before deciding whether or not to use them. Surprised you, huh? There’s you, thinking that I bung in every ol’ modern word … but the truth is that there isn’t a writing day that goes by, for me, when I don’t check the origins of at least a handful of words or expressions to see if they were in use in the sixteenth century. Not that I won’t necessarily use them if they weren’t, if I think that I can get away with it…but at least I am then making a conscious decision (if only on ground of spurious authenticity), not a ‘mistake’.

Brat: sixteenth century. Wrongfoot: first recorded usage, 1928.

So much for ‘accuracy’. Where I come a-cropper with some readers, though, is that just as with the viewing, it’s authenticity that’s important to the reading experience. For some readers, the dialogue that my characters speak just seems ridiculous, it jarrs, it ruins that crucial suspension of belief and the reader puts the book down (or, er, even throws it across the room).

And I do understand. Really, I do. Why do I do it, then? – if there’s a spectrum from cod olde English to contemporary, why do I set up camp at the far end of it?

Well, many – most? – writers of historical fiction want to stress the difference between ‘then’ and ‘now’. It’s where they find their inspiraton, it’s what interests them, draws them: it’s where the story is, the drama. And the same can be said for many readers of historical fiction, too: part of the pleasure, for them, lies in the strangeness. But for me, the opposite is true. What draws me isn’t the difference but the similariities. It’s not what I’d expect of myself, being a believer that each of us is largely a product of our of time and place… but, well, there you are: it turns out that for the purposes of fiction-writing, I don’t see myself as writing about Tudors but about characters who just happen to be Tudor.


My ‘job’ as a fiction writer, as I see it, is, basically, to make things feel real (and for ‘things’, read ‘people’, ‘relationships’, ‘dynamics’, ‘situations’… anything, everything). I want to have my readers feel that they are there, in a particular situation with particular people. The last thing I want to do is flag up differences, because that – I feel – creates distance, and the characters become curiosities.


Think back to that business of accents. It depends on your position, doesn’t it – are you ‘with’ those characters, are you right there in their world with them, perhaps even, kind of, one of them? Or are you looking and listening in from the outside, observing them? When you are reading one of my novels, I want you to be there, I want that to be your world, your people. And nobody ever hears him- or herself talking in an accent. The way I speak is normal – it’s you who has the accent.

Having said all that, I have a confession to make. It’s not that my reasons aren’t heartfelt, as I hope you can tell… but, well, they didn’t start out as reasons. I’ve made them into reasons in retrospect. At the time of writing my first historical novel, I was following my nose. That first novel was about Anne Boleyn, and one of the two narrative voices was to be hers. What struck me from my reading of her was that she was forthright, outspoken, uncompromising and, above all, for her time, ‘modern’. How was I going to re-create her on the page? Well, not by having her speaking mannered ‘old-fashioned language’. That wouldn’t work. This was a woman who, on at least one occasion, had foreign ambassadors so disgusted by the language that she used that in defiance of protocol they turned on their heels and left the room. In a situation such as that, what would I have her say? Frankly, ‘Christ’s fut’ or anything like it just wasn’t going to cut it.

So, that’s why, in my novel, she ‘speaks’ in up-to-date language. Because, in her time, her world, that was what she did.

When I’d finished The Queen of Subtleties, my agent and editor each compiled a list of words which had, for them, jarred: words that had gone too far. I was grateful for their efforts and I did study those lists, but in the end decided to ignore them because, otherwise, I’d be writing by committee; the result would be cautious, mealy-mouthed, which was exactly what Anne Boleyn wasn’t. I’d had a vision for that book, and I decided I had to stay true to that.

And, on the whole, I liked the result, which was why I went on to write similarly in subsequent books although not as yet as uncompromisingly – as ‘in yer face’ – because none of those subsequent characters have quite required it. I do understand that for some readers the modern language ‘gets in the way’, and I sympathise. But that’s how the stilted voices of many other historical novels seems to me. I want to write historical novels that I’d want to read: ones in which I can believe utterly in the people and imagine myself there.